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Writing a Screenplay :
As an assignment in my creative writing class, I had to work with the illustrious minds, Tan and Fern, on a screenplay. Our first step was figuring what type of story we would write. We took inspiration from a real life murder case (the murder of Thai actress Tangmo, to be exact), and decided on writing a narrative centered around murder and investigation.
Improvements from Workshop Letters :
Our group received two insightful workshop letters. One suggested adding more apparent emotions and the other advised maintaining a correct format, though both agreed on the information provided being sufficient. We improved upon our screenplay by using the software Studiobinder for formatting and manually checking for arrangement errors. As for emotions, we tried using more indicative language (such as employing '?!' to voice frustration).